Ruthless Mentor — Let's see how your book measures up

Honest, actionable feedback for writers who want to get better.

Expectation vs Reality — everyone says your book is amazing but sales are zero

We aren't afraid to
hurt your feelings.

"It's amazing!" doesn't help you fix chapter 4. You need someone who'll read your whole book, give you detailed feedback, and tell you exactly how to make it better!

We guarantee No sugarcoating and No vague comments.

Get honest feedback

What your review includes.

Every submission gets the full 10-part treatment. No shortcuts.

01

First Impressions

Gut reaction. What landed, what made us stop reading.

02

Author's Voice

Does the writing have a pulse or feel generic? We score it.

03

Prose Quality

Crutch words counted. Dead metaphors flagged. Filler killed.

04

Repeat Words

"Sharp" 14 times in 20 pages? We find all 14.

05

Depth Check

Does your book go there or wave from a safe distance?

06

Character Grades

A through F. Motivation, backstory, voice, arc, Mary Sue check.

07

Story Mechanics

Plot holes, pacing, stakes, dialogue, show-vs-tell.

08

Line-Level Fixes

Specific passages quoted and rewritten for you.

See it in action.

"Her voice was sharp, cutting through the silence. The sharp edge of his words left a sharp sting. She felt a sharp pain in her chest, a sharp reminder of what she'd lost. The sharp wind howled against the sharp cliffs..."

"sharp" 7x "just" 23x "felt" 12x "seemed" 9x

Simple pricing. Start at $5.

Auto-detected by word count. Every tier includes the full review + printable PDF.

Children's / Picture Book

$5

Up to 5,000 words

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Chapter Book

$10

5,000 – 25,000 words

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Adult

$20

100,000+ words

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Full review + printable PDF included with every tier.

Why I built this.

When I was writing my first chapter book, everyone told me it was amazing. Friends, family, everyone. And I believed them — of course I did. It was my first book. I had my author goggles on.

Then one guy I met in public told me my book had no plot. Not to be mean. Just honest. I had to rewrite the whole thing.

I wasn't mad at him. I was mad that I'd wasted months getting nothing but "it's great!" from everyone around me, just to have one stranger be the first person to tell me the truth.

That's why I built Ruthless Mentor. So you don't have to wait six months and a random encounter to find out what's actually wrong.

— Ryan

Questions.

Is this going to hurt my feelings?

Maybe. But every critique comes with a reason and a fix.

Does my draft need to be finished?

No. Rough drafts, single chapters, half-baked ideas. All welcome.

How do I submit?

Copy and paste your text directly into the submission form.

Is my stuff private?

Yes. Processed and gone. Nothing stored, shared, or trained on.

How does pricing work?

Four tiers by word count: Children's $5, Chapter Book $10, Middle Grade/YA $15, Adult $20. Auto-detected. PDF included.

Can I re-submit after I revise?

Absolutely. Fix the issues we flagged, submit again, and your new review will reflect the improvements. It's the cheapest way to track your progress as a writer.